This will be the last video I watch, you've not learned anything from your previous videos and the criticism given.

Still too long, no structure and too much deviation from the point.

First 8 minutes gone there wasn't even a mention on how to even START Planetary Interaction. You warble on about some totally irrelevant stuff about making money while you sleep and then markets and oh my god just please stop making videos.

Make a PLAN for your video, REHEARSE what you are going to say, REVIEW the video before you render and, god forbid, publish, EDIT the video so it actually looks polished.

I hope you take something on board from my last round of constructive criticism because I won't be back.

Also one more thing: you have a lot more impact if you actually DO what you're talking about at the same time, not just lecture for 15 minutes before you even undock.

I'm going to do you justice by watching the entire thing but really you either need to make a 180 in how you make these videos or just stop wasting your time on this.

As I'm watching this video, you have a black screen with background music and no commentary from about 14mins to 18mins, this whole thing just reeks of amateur, unpolished and terrible video making. Can you honestly tell me that you're proud of what you made?

I must ask you: what's the purpose behind making these videos? You're clearly not up to date with a lot of game mechanics and sometimes you just plain get things wrong (You're also terrible at pvp, but that's just a personal gripe with your video style, it has no real impact on the quality of the guide).

If this has all been some elaborate troll I firstly, salute you because you got me hook line and sinker and secondly, I must question your mental health.

Did you watch other video guides before attempting to make your own? You're not the first one to do this so people expect the quality to be at the VERY least on par to what is already available. You didn't deliver and after 17 videos I can barely see any improvement from the first.

Create something good and you will get praise for it, don't blame it on "trolls" when people dislike your videos because they dislike them for a reason: they're crap.

Okay. Firstly I would like to point out that I am a newbie to EvE (just over 2 months) and I am trying to look for a way to get passive income, so I am considering PI as an option.

Now onto the more important part. I don't know what your other videos are like, but this hasn't helped me understand anything at all. It's completely baffling due to the fact you know (by the looks of things) about as much as I do in regards to the topic. I can barely hear you (not due to microphone issues as you say) but due to mumbling and the sheer amount of boredom in your voice.

This is not a good way to help newbies like myself to get into the topic.

Come on people, help the guy out with what he's trying to do and volunteer. Seriously, go back and look at some of the first videos he posted, he really needs the help.

I hope that doesn't come off as a personal attack or anything and I'm not trying to derail the the thread. This is about helping people after all, and he needs help.

OP please look into taking a public speaking course at a local college